Some Point of view (POV) changes are disruptive and obvious, others are subtle and debatable. It’s the ones that deal with actions that I have trouble with. In the 6 examples below, we are supposed to always be in Skye’s POV. Which ones would you consider POV problems?
For example in #1, do you believe Skye can be aware of her eyes popping wide as she stares at her boss, or is this something another would be observing about her? What are your thoughts about the following examples?
1) “Dear Darlene?” Skye’s eyes popped wide as she stared at her boss. An advice column?
2) An indulgent smile lifted her lips as she crossed her arms and stared at her sleeping sister.
3) Her scowl deepened.
4) Skye’s face crumpled into lines of disgust.
5) Her eyes widened.
6) Faith opened her mouth as if to explain, but then frowned and changed her mind.